New band - Shades of Plato

[RetroRocket]

Hi guys, I'm a frequent visitor to this site, but don't often post...so please forgive my cheekiness...

My mate Tim and i have recently started writing and recording under the name 'Shades of Plato'. The ambition is Stranglers vs Jethro Tull (well...no one else has done it!)

As you are all so obviously a discerning lot...we would really appreciate your views on these songs:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TQEi79jhoxQ

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gomhrdwUJhY

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NdlxN1qaA1k

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pynfCMSGSJM

These are quite basic demos...no (real) drums or guitars yet..but I'm sure you will get the idea. We hope to use these to recruit more band members.

Please be as frank and constructive as you like (I'm sure you will be!)

Cheers
RR