I wake up every day with my phone stuck to my brain
I go to sleep at night with my phone stuck to my brain.
In in Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
In in Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
My friends are facebook,Twitter and Instagram.
Im in Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
I'm in Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
I lost my phone today
Took my eyes off the cloud
I don't care what they say.
I'm happy
In Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber word
Cyber world
I'm in Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
it ends with "i'm in" sudden end.
Ok obviously I am know songwriter,but it is the first song I have ever written.
"Cyber World" my song dedicated to I Phone addiction.
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Re: "Cyber World" my song dedicated to I Phone addiction.
looks ok to me you are writing about what you know
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Re: "Cyber World" my song dedicated to I Phone addiction.
Does the job mate, keep up the good work.
Do you have music as well?
Do you have music as well?
...I'm making lists of all the people I love,
and all the cunts that should fuck off...
and all the cunts that should fuck off...
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Re: "Cyber World" my song dedicated to I Phone addiction.
send that to the stranglers it seems they could use some help lol
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I Hate You !
Re: "Cyber World" my song dedicated to I Phone addiction.
Maybe Buzzcocks could record it as a follow up to the song 'Virtually Real' from their last album...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nwH8fy5_2xs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nwH8fy5_2xs
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Re: "Cyber World" my song dedicated to I Phone addiction.
No I am a drummer? If I ever get in another band would like to put music to it,really hard to write songs,i admire people who can.MiB81 wrote:Does the job mate, keep up the good work.
Do you have music as well?
Re: "Cyber World" my song dedicated to I Phone addiction.
Well it would be the worst Stranglers song ever if they used it? I am sure they will get a new album out at some stage,hopefully.aldinblack wrote:send that to the stranglers it seems they could use some help lol
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Re: "Cyber World" my song dedicated to I Phone addiction.
Now "Virtually Real" is a great song.Mine not,but just my spin on people who just can't stop looking or using an I Phone.Rockula wrote:Maybe Buzzcocks could record it as a follow up to the song 'Virtually Real' from their last album...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nwH8fy5_2xs
Its their choice,but has serious ramifications when people go on Facebook while driving and kill someone,as was the case
recently and people crossing roads with loud music in earphones and looking down at their I phone,very silly.
It's a crap song but felt better after I wrote it,I even sing it when I'm walking when no one is around.