"Cyber World" my song dedicated to I Phone addiction.

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Greatkudu
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"Cyber World" my song dedicated to I Phone addiction.

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I wake up every day with my phone stuck to my brain
I go to sleep at night with my phone stuck to my brain.

In in Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world

In in Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world

My friends are facebook,Twitter and Instagram.

Im in Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world

I'm in Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world

I lost my phone today
Took my eyes off the cloud
I don't care what they say.
I'm happy

In Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber word
Cyber world

I'm in Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world
Cyber world

it ends with "i'm in" sudden end.

Ok obviously I am know songwriter,but it is the first song I have ever written.
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looks ok to me you are writing about what you know
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Does the job mate, keep up the good work.
Do you have music as well?
...I'm making lists of all the people I love,
and all the cunts that should fuck off...
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send that to the stranglers it seems they could use some help lol

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Maybe Buzzcocks could record it as a follow up to the song 'Virtually Real' from their last album...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nwH8fy5_2xs
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MiB81 wrote:Does the job mate, keep up the good work.
Do you have music as well?
No I am a drummer? If I ever get in another band would like to put music to it,really hard to write songs,i admire people who can.
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aldinblack wrote:send that to the stranglers it seems they could use some help lol

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Well it would be the worst Stranglers song ever if they used it? I am sure they will get a new album out at some stage,hopefully.
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Rockula wrote:Maybe Buzzcocks could record it as a follow up to the song 'Virtually Real' from their last album...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nwH8fy5_2xs
Now "Virtually Real" is a great song.Mine not,but just my spin on people who just can't stop looking or using an I Phone.

Its their choice,but has serious ramifications when people go on Facebook while driving and kill someone,as was the case

recently and people crossing roads with loud music in earphones and looking down at their I phone,very silly.

It's a crap song but felt better after I wrote it,I even sing it when I'm walking when no one is around.
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